Reviewer: jack Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2017 - 10:34 am Title: Chapter 10

that truly was beutiful and my 3rd favrot story im sad its over

Reviewer: Kristi Lynne fitzpatrick Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2014 - 10:20 am Title: Chapter 10

Absolutely excellent story haven't enjoyed a sweet sentimantal story as much as this much for months.  Will be checking back regularly to see as Lucas matures how he chooses to live his life. Fast moving lots of detail but does not get bogged down.   Love it

Hugs, Kristi 

 

 

Reviewer: Joslyn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2014 - 03:26 am Title: Chapter 10

So this story came out fairly decent it has a lot of neat sceens and I did enjoy it.

I how ever will say that it seemed that there was a lot of jumping I honestly couldn't tell what day it was half the time. It was a little quick to get the story done.

The story and sceen at most parts was good I could actually see myself being in Lucas Lacy's position

Good job

Reviewer: Pepperpuppy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2014 - 06:54 pm Title: Chapter 10

I enjoyed the story immensely.  

Reviewer: Teekabell Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2012 - 09:34 pm Title: Chapter 10

This was a great little tale. Poor kid got into more than he thought he could handle, but found out he actually fit right in.  Good job of showing the growth of the main character and the supporting characters.  Afterall, this wasn't just his journey of being a boy on a girls team, it was of the girls on the team accepting him onto the team.

 

Thanks for sharing

Teekabell



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